> They left a fair bit of stuff out from the book, but with the typical movie length they’d have to.
There’s a book, then. Good, hope it’s not an abysmally bad book like “The abyss”. Checks web.
> Watney is impaled by an antenna … but with no way to contact Earth
Surely an antenna can be jury-rigged very easily.
> Burning hydrazine to make water.
A really expensive way to make water, and dangerous, hydrazine is toxic stuff. Better recycle ALL that water, from all three of urine feces and sweat. PS, saving some hydrazine would have solved that orbit matching problem at the end of the film.
> recover the unmanned Pathfinder lander and Sojourner rover
Sojourner wasn’t much of a traveller. It traveled only 100 metres before communication was lost. Can you spell “flat battery”.
> a tear in the canvas at one of the Hab airlocks breaches, collapsing the Hab and cannoning Watney away from it, breaking his suit visor. Watney survives and repairs the Hab, but his plants are dead.
Plants tend to be hardier than humans, most could survive a short time without air, and potatoes for example could be relatively easily regrown from either seed or from the eyes. But has he enough time?
> with no time to build a probe with a soft-landing system … 300 metres per second.
Hmm, there’s soft and there’s ‘not too hard’, 30 m/s would have been better. Depends on the mass of the craft. Surely there are some spare airbags hanging around on Earth.
> Meanwhile, an astrodynamicist named Rich Purnell has discovered a “slingshot” trajectory that could get Hermes and the Ares 3 crew back to Mars
Well duh, that’d be the first thing to check, and take less than a day to confirm as soon as the Martian got a message through. Even I could do the maths.
> a dust storm is approaching Watney’s course, potentially stranding him on the journey if the rover’s solar cells cannot recharge
Solar cells can recharge after the storm has passed, but it might take more than a couple of weeks. Also, enough light should get through the storm to keep everything from freezing up.
> Watney becomes aware of the encroaching dust storm and makes a rough measurement of the speed and direction of its movement, allowing him to go around it.
Chuckles softly to self – no chance in hell.
> Surviving a rover rollover
Fair enough.
> During launch, the canvas patch tears, slowing the liftoff and leaving the MAV on a course too far from the Hermes for Watney to be rescued.
Same problem twice. Why couldn’t the mission designers have made the “canvas” stronger?
> Slowing down to match the MAV’s velocity by blowing a hole in the Hermes front airlock with an improvised sugar-and-liquid-oxygen bomb.
Would tend to kill all those onboard. There are easier methods, such as simultaneously jumping out both airlocks with a little handheld propulsion for manoeuvring. Killing relative speed by crashing spacesuits into one another.