Date: 30/01/2016 18:58:13
From: CrazyNeutrino
ID: 839191
Subject: Erotic Poetry

Here is one of my Erotic poems

In Sally’s Garden

Wearing your glasses,
you smell natures
sweet smells,
as you lie on the ground,
you let the sun sink into
every part of your flesh.

A gentle breeze cools your lips,
you watch a pigmy possum lick
the nectar from a flower,
and you imagine your own,
as the sun warms every part
of your body.

You refresh yourself
with cool water from a pond,
throwing it over your body,
you feel its coolness
as it goes down your throat
as nature promised.

Refreshed you warm
your other side,
as two butterflies
land on the small of your back,
with you unknowing,
they make love,
as your fingers start to explore
your garden.

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Date: 30/01/2016 18:59:10
From: CrazyNeutrino
ID: 839192
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

another

Veils of love

To dream beside one’s love sleeping,
intense imagery arrives embracing subdued sleep.
To reach celestial heights of love,
within a small circle of desperate intimacy.

Dreams tell me everything that speak of love,
letting itself in to surrender all confessions,
you lay beside me embraced in quiet virtue,
as a statue that teases Venus rises to reveal all
to the host of erotic art confined within the dream.

Your aura of femininity captures and engulfs,
holding me with experienced breath of naked perfume.
Calling me from the far most horizon of my dream,
as a profusion of voluptuary kisses drift in the wind,
reaching various parts of my soul that aroused me
with extreme delicacy, desperate to remove the
veils of love held within the dream.

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Date: 30/01/2016 19:00:27
From: CrazyNeutrino
ID: 839194
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

and another one

Playtime

River of desire poetic sex
User defined mutual masturbation sex
Filthy anonymous bag over head sex
Pull her underpants down slowly sex
Erotic hot kinky black stocking suspenders sex?

I want this sex.
She said no you cannot have it,
so we ran naked all around the house.
It works for me, does it work for you?

Hydraulically operated improved Saturday night sex
Kiss cuddle lick suck day or night tease no means yes sex
Gothic baroque macabre nightmare cult sex
Ferocious foaming froth effervescent fervour orgasmic sex
Alternative cosmic ambient holistic hippy shake sex?

I want this sex.
She said no you cannot have it,
so we ran naked all around the house.
It works for me, does it work for you?

Looking at the ceiling bored tired headache meaningless sex
Disorganised excited disoriented foreplay teenage sex
Naughty public display or group orgy or Bi sex
Fast lusty sweaty wrapped up bed sex
Slow stand up against wall yuppie sex?

I want this sex.
She said no you cannot have it,
so we ran naked all around the house.
it works for me, does it work for you?

Relaxed massage have a feel all over sensual sex
Objective fantasy bathtub or shower sex
Virtual reality with who ever you want sex
Sony walkman ray ban sunglasses sunset beach sex
Smelly but nice oral cannabis cocaine induced drug sex?

I want this sex.
She said no you cannot have it,
so we ran naked all around the house.
it works for me, does it work for you?

Suspended in air bondage in hammock sex
Washing machine sound slish slosh harder wet sex
Inebriated intoxicated blindfolded one night stand sex
Restricted, totally censored in and out sex
Upside down in chains, floating in balloon unconventional sex?

I want this sex.
She said no you cannot have it,
so we ran naked all around the house.
it works for me, does it work for you?

Frustrated KY jelly cannot get any satisfaction sex
Hero heroine all hype movie adventure Hollywood sex
Late night cuddle aroused randy horny turned on steamy car sex
Domestic ordinary nude bedroom R rated sex
Magazine or background XXX video explicit sex?

He wanted this sex.
I said no you cannot have it,
and I farted, it put him off completely.
It works for me, does it work for you?

Inside or outside, good old fashioned romantic sex
Reminiscent hopeful does it have a sequel sex
Clean and happy g-string home sweet home sex
Totally committed reproductive conceiving a baby sex
Natural earthy normal great sex, do it to music sex?

I want this sex.
She said no you cannot have it,
so we ran naked all around the house.
it works for me, does it work for you?

Morning or night sex
Nipple nibling clitoral fetis feather or ice cube fantasy sex
do it sunlight or in total darkness sex
oysters and red wine food edible consumable sex
french kiss so sensual erotic mouth satisfying sex

I want this sex.
She said I could have it,
so we chased each other naked all around the house,
so it works for me, does it work for you?

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Date: 30/01/2016 19:47:49
From: The_observer
ID: 839253
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

CrazyNeutrino said:


another

Veils of love

To dream beside one’s love sleeping,
intense imagery arrives embracing subdued sleep.
To reach celestial heights of love,
within a small circle of desperate intimacy.

Dreams tell me everything that speak of love,
letting itself in to surrender all confessions,
you lay beside me embraced in quiet virtue,
as a statue that teases Venus rises to reveal all
to the host of erotic art confined within the dream.

Your aura of femininity captures and engulfs,
holding me with experienced breath of naked perfume.
Calling me from the far most horizon of my dream,
as a profusion of voluptuary kisses drift in the wind,
reaching various parts of my soul that aroused me
with extreme delicacy, desperate to remove the
veils of love held within the dream.

Whats the dole pay these days?

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Date: 30/01/2016 19:52:16
From: CrazyNeutrino
ID: 839255
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

The_observer said:


CrazyNeutrino said:

another

Veils of love

To dream beside one’s love sleeping,
intense imagery arrives embracing subdued sleep.
To reach celestial heights of love,
within a small circle of desperate intimacy.

Dreams tell me everything that speak of love,
letting itself in to surrender all confessions,
you lay beside me embraced in quiet virtue,
as a statue that teases Venus rises to reveal all
to the host of erotic art confined within the dream.

Your aura of femininity captures and engulfs,
holding me with experienced breath of naked perfume.
Calling me from the far most horizon of my dream,
as a profusion of voluptuary kisses drift in the wind,
reaching various parts of my soul that aroused me
with extreme delicacy, desperate to remove the
veils of love held within the dream.

Whats the dole pay these days?

More than what poetry pays

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Date: 30/01/2016 19:55:33
From: sibeen
ID: 839257
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

CrazyNeutrino said:

Veils of love

To dream beside one’s love sleeping,
intense imagery arrives embracing subdued sleep.
To reach celestial heights of love,
within a small circle of desperate intimacy.

Dreams tell me everything that speak of love,
letting itself in to surrender all confessions,
you lay beside me embraced in quiet virtue,
as a statue that teases Venus rises to reveal all
to the host of erotic art confined within the dream.

Your aura of femininity captures and engulfs,
holding me with experienced breath of naked perfume.
Calling me from the far most horizon of my dream,
as a profusion of voluptuary kisses drift in the wind,
reaching various parts of my soul that aroused me
with extreme delicacy, desperate to remove the
veils of love held within the dream.

You’re not exactly Colin Leslie Dean, are you?

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Date: 30/01/2016 19:57:31
From: Arts
ID: 839258
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

sibeen said:

You’re not exactly Colin Leslie Dean, are you?

no one is, and or that, we are thankful

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Date: 30/01/2016 19:59:02
From: CrazyNeutrino
ID: 839259
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

sibeen said:


CrazyNeutrino said:

Veils of love

To dream beside one’s love sleeping,
intense imagery arrives embracing subdued sleep.
To reach celestial heights of love,
within a small circle of desperate intimacy.

Dreams tell me everything that speak of love,
letting itself in to surrender all confessions,
you lay beside me embraced in quiet virtue,
as a statue that teases Venus rises to reveal all
to the host of erotic art confined within the dream.

Your aura of femininity captures and engulfs,
holding me with experienced breath of naked perfume.
Calling me from the far most horizon of my dream,
as a profusion of voluptuary kisses drift in the wind,
reaching various parts of my soul that aroused me
with extreme delicacy, desperate to remove the
veils of love held within the dream.

You’re not exactly Colin Leslie Dean, are you?

I hope not

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Date: 30/01/2016 19:59:54
From: Peak Warming Man
ID: 839260
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?23714-Controversial-poet-colin-leslie-dean

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:02:03
From: Arts
ID: 839261
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

Peak Warming Man said:


http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?23714-Controversial-poet-colin-leslie-dean

does anyone else get the feeling that pam69ur is CLD?

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:09:03
From: Peak Warming Man
ID: 839263
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

Arts said:


Peak Warming Man said:

http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?23714-Controversial-poet-colin-leslie-dean

does anyone else get the feeling that pam69ur is CLD?

No, I don’t think that would happen on the internet.

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:21:03
From: CrazyNeutrino
ID: 839267
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

Its good that everyone has different experience

all forms of poetry interest me, transition’s poems of fleeting moments

I generally write my poems outside, on good days, when Im straight

sometimes I write poems on Cannabis but not often

mostly because I listen to music when im on cannabis, or surfing science on the web or working on pottery

one of my favourite poems is a Science Fiction Poem its from an SF poem anthology

An Anthology of Space Poetry
Frontier of Going
Selected by John Fairfax

the one I like is by Peter Redgrove Titled The Haunted Armchair

it reminds me of the last scene in 2001 in the Bedroom there is a bed and there are a few chairs

perfection and existence

but we cannot have perfection, but some have a craving for it

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:23:14
From: dv
ID: 839269
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

Non sunt in coeli, quia fvccant vvivys of heli

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:26:39
From: Peak Warming Man
ID: 839271
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

Looks like Colin peaked in 2008 and then went dark.

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:28:31
From: dv
ID: 839272
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

Peak Warming Man said:


Looks like Colin peaked in 2008 and then went dark.

Good move, get out on top.

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:30:01
From: CrazyNeutrino
ID: 839274
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

I have a whole shelf on erotic poetry

some I highly recommend

Erotique Noire
Black Erotica
Edited by Miriam De Costa Willis….

Anthology of Women’s Writing
Erotica
Edited by Margaret Reynolds

I have heaps on the kindle

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:30:11
From: Peak Warming Man
ID: 839275
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

Hehehe, he’s been more than mentioned in dispatches on Wiki.

March 7, 2007.
Really, it’s not a ‘bee in my bonnet’ except in that I find the abuse of Wikipedia in this way vexing – my interest in Australian poetry is slight, never mind anti-poetry. I only came across your various edits when commenting on the Austrlian erotic poetry AfD and pointed out th.=at every single thing you have written on Wikipedia is an inappropriate attempt to promote a self-published poet called Colin Leslie Deans (including cutting and pasting him into an article on a music CD by an American band called Erotic Poetry). This is not the place to debate the literary merits of Mr Dean, but his only GHits are a library note of a book which you apparently publish, plus numerous inappropriate Wiki edits and a couple of web poetry fora where a mysterious new user has come on, praised Mr Dean in much the same terms as you use here and then been roundly and unanimously told to stop self-spamming. If Australian anti-poetry solely consists of Mr Dean then there is no notability whatsoever in Australian anti-poetry and any finished article on anti-poetry will not require an Australian section (there is one just now but unless more verifiable notability can be demonstrated I can’t see it lasting very long). Apart from anything else, your definition of ‘anti-poetry’ clashes with the other more prominent sources on the web and your claim that Mr Dean founded it is in fact incorrect, except perhaps for your own personal and very specific definition of the term, as reflected by Marasmusine’s edit. Hopefully Marasmusine can work on the article, because there is certainly notability in the actual topic, however. StuartDouglas 09:25, 7 March 2007 (UTC)

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:31:10
From: bob(from black rock)
ID: 839276
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

dv said:


Non sunt in coeli, quia fvccant vvivys of heli

My Latin is a bit rusty, but does this mean, “your Grand Pa wants a head job, but he has just shit his pants?”

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:31:17
From: Arts
ID: 839277
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

dv said:


Peak Warming Man said:

Looks like Colin peaked in 2008 and then went dark.

Good move, get out on top.

he wrote a ‘poem’ about that

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:31:31
From: Peak Warming Man
ID: 839278
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

>>(including cutting and pasting him into an article on a music CD by an American band called Erotic Poetry).

ROFL.

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:32:12
From: Peak Warming Man
ID: 839279
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

bob(from black rock) said:


dv said:

Non sunt in coeli, quia fvccant vvivys of heli

My Latin is a bit rusty, but does this mean, “your Grand Pa wants a head job, but he has just shit his pants?”

Evening Bob.

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:32:49
From: dv
ID: 839280
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

Peak Warming Man said:

Hehehe, he’s been more than mentioned in dispatches on Wiki.

March 7, 2007.
Really, it’s not a ‘bee in my bonnet’ except in that I find the abuse of Wikipedia in this way vexing – my interest in Australian poetry is slight, never mind anti-poetry. I only came across your various edits when commenting on the Austrlian erotic poetry AfD and pointed out th.=at every single thing you have written on Wikipedia is an inappropriate attempt to promote a self-published poet called Colin Leslie Deans (including cutting and pasting him into an article on a music CD by an American band called Erotic Poetry). This is not the place to debate the literary merits of Mr Dean, but his only GHits are a library note of a book which you apparently publish, plus numerous inappropriate Wiki edits and a couple of web poetry fora where a mysterious new user has come on, praised Mr Dean in much the same terms as you use here and then been roundly and unanimously told to stop self-spamming. If Australian anti-poetry solely consists of Mr Dean then there is no notability whatsoever in Australian anti-poetry and any finished article on anti-poetry will not require an Australian section (there is one just now but unless more verifiable notability can be demonstrated I can’t see it lasting very long). Apart from anything else, your definition of ‘anti-poetry’ clashes with the other more prominent sources on the web and your claim that Mr Dean founded it is in fact incorrect, except perhaps for your own personal and very specific definition of the term, as reflected by Marasmusine’s edit. Hopefully Marasmusine can work on the article, because there is certainly notability in the actual topic, however. StuartDouglas 09:25, 7 March 2007 (UTC)

The culture wars continue.

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:33:11
From: dv
ID: 839281
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

bob(from black rock) said:


dv said:

Non sunt in coeli, quia fvccant vvivys of heli

My Latin is a bit rusty, but does this mean, “your Grand Pa wants a head job, but he has just shit his pants?”

no

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:34:55
From: bob(from black rock)
ID: 839282
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

Hi PWM, how they hanging?

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:36:51
From: Peak Warming Man
ID: 839283
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

bob(from black rock) said:


Hi PWM, how they hanging?

Well.

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:39:09
From: party_pants
ID: 839285
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

Less chat, more erotic poetry …

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:39:46
From: Arts
ID: 839286
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

at a point, I tried to help CLD, offer him advice on improving the virtue of his ideas in verse, create a pattern that people who enjoy poetry in this form will find appeal in and appreciate.

he told me to fuck off..

and so ended our brief encounter.

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:40:55
From: Peak Warming Man
ID: 839287
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

Arts said:


at a point, I tried to help CLD, offer him advice on improving the virtue of his ideas in verse, create a pattern that people who enjoy poetry in this form will find appeal in and appreciate.

he told me to fuck off..

and so ended our brief encounter.

Artists are touchy.

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:42:06
From: party_pants
ID: 839288
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

Arts said:


at a point, I tried to help CLD, offer him advice on improving the virtue of his ideas in verse, create a pattern that people who enjoy poetry in this form will find appeal in and appreciate.

he told me to fuck off..

and so ended our brief encounter.

You sure it wasn’t just a very sort erotic poem?

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:43:24
From: bob(from black rock)
ID: 839289
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

Arts said:


at a point, I tried to help CLD, offer him advice on improving the virtue of his ideas in verse, create a pattern that people who enjoy poetry in this form will find appeal in and appreciate.

he told me to fuck off..

and so ended our brief encounter.

Not “Fuck in the direction of off”? how rude.

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:44:01
From: party_pants
ID: 839291
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

fuck

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:44:26
From: dv
ID: 839292
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

Arts said:

he told me to fuck off..

Mmm. Succinct yet poignant, I see what he did there.

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:46:35
From: Arts
ID: 839293
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

Peak Warming Man said:


Arts said:

at a point, I tried to help CLD, offer him advice on improving the virtue of his ideas in verse, create a pattern that people who enjoy poetry in this form will find appeal in and appreciate.

he told me to fuck off..

and so ended our brief encounter.

Artists are touchy.

I ever touched him.. and anyway, you can’t prove anything

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:47:35
From: Arts
ID: 839294
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

party_pants said:


Arts said:

at a point, I tried to help CLD, offer him advice on improving the virtue of his ideas in verse, create a pattern that people who enjoy poetry in this form will find appeal in and appreciate.

he told me to fuck off..

and so ended our brief encounter.

You sure it wasn’t just a very sort erotic poem?

not very original…

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:48:10
From: CrazyNeutrino
ID: 839295
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

dv said:


Non sunt in coeli, quia fvccant vvivys of heli

men are still the same today
you could say the same of paedophile priests
they will not go the Heaven either

early poetry helped drive peoples imaginations

like a the naughty monks in Carmina Burana

http://tylatin.org/extras/index.html

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Date: 30/01/2016 20:57:05
From: Ian
ID: 839298
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

Dear little Flo
I love you so
Especially in your nighty
When the moonlight flits
Acrrross yerr tits
Oh Jesus Christ almighty

Duds Moore

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Date: 30/01/2016 21:05:46
From: CrazyNeutrino
ID: 839307
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

bob(from black rock) said:


dv said:

Non sunt in coeli, quia fvccant vvivys of heli

My Latin is a bit rusty, but does this mean, “your Grand Pa wants a head job, but he has just shit his pants?”

no its about naughty priests fucking other mens wife’s

the whole poem is here

https://en.wikisource.org/wiki/Flen_flyys

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Date: 30/01/2016 21:10:56
From: CrazyNeutrino
ID: 839310
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

CrazyNeutrino said:


bob(from black rock) said:

dv said:

Non sunt in coeli, quia fvccant vvivys of heli

My Latin is a bit rusty, but does this mean, “your Grand Pa wants a head job, but he has just shit his pants?”

no its about naughty priests fucking other mens wife’s

the whole poem is here

https://en.wikisource.org/wiki/Flen_flyys

and google translate is here

gives you some idea

https://translate.google.com.au/

There are other better translation tools around

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Date: 30/01/2016 21:35:50
From: bob(from black rock)
ID: 839328
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

The Ballad of Eskimo Nell is my favourite, though there are proly hundreds of versions, “Google” him.

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Date: 30/01/2016 23:55:07
From: Bubblecar
ID: 839439
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

That’s a quite a nice butt that you got there,
More than I’d expect on such an ugly bear.
I suppose you think I’m a precious hussy,
But matter of fact, I ain’t that fussy.

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Date: 31/01/2016 18:55:11
From: Michael V
ID: 839687
Subject: re: Erotic Poetry

Arts said:


dv said:

Peak Warming Man said:

Looks like Colin peaked in 2008 and then went dark.

Good move, get out on top.

he wrote a ‘poem’ about that

LOL!

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